ebinmoothedam

Hi
I dont know whether I should post this or not.
One of my close friend is a poet and she wrote a poem about me after seeing my passion and dedication towards our sport. I am just posting a pic I made with the poem included.
Hope you all like it.



Thanks for your time !

nickalltogether

not a fan of poems that don't rhyme but it's nice.

Standupnfall

It needs a few more !!!!!!!!!!!!!! and ??????????????

ebinmoothedam

she is a 16 year old kid !
may be she will start writing with more rhyme-ness once she writes more !

bigsam875

dont poems somewhat rhyme ... i just thought you could have done soooo much more ... she has a great start ... she needed more time to look at it ... maybe a few years ....such a good start ... the wording is too obvious... it read as if she was try'n way to hard to be a ryder for a few minutes ... maybe you should ride her around for a few weeks ... show her the deal

Armenian

did u bone her?

sdfkillz

poems do not have to rhyme, ryhming is just one small form of poetry, of which im not a big fan of.

ebinmoothedam

hmm
some like it ...so dont !
anyways ....i am happy to know that most of u liked it.